I’ve tried not to let it showthe truth that I can’t let you go.But I am stuck here waiting while my heart and sanity are debating
soulful poem with good rhythmical feel nice
ReplyDeletethe first two lines - perfect,
ReplyDeletethe heart's ache is evident in them
but the word 'debating' is bit ........
@sowmya Thank you Sowmya!
ReplyDelete@Sujatha Sathya There were many. Sanity won finally though :)
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