Saturday, September 6, 2008

Mystified


I’ve tried not to let it show
the truth that I can’t let you go.
But I am stuck here waiting
                                        while my heart and sanity are debating

4 comments:

  1. soulful poem with good rhythmical feel nice

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  2. the first two lines - perfect,
    the heart's ache is evident in them

    but the word 'debating' is bit ........

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  3. @Sujatha Sathya There were many. Sanity won finally though :)

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