Tuesday, June 14, 2011

# POETESS AT WORK

Standing at the door

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Standing at the door, I wait for you...
The wind blew off the charm of the face..
The clouds were moving at a slower pace.


I saw through the clouds, I found no messages.
Birds flying back home without singing their song.
Masked is the dusk, gone is the dawn

My eyes are still on the road,
They just changed to moist mode.
While the hope still remains
Memories of broken promises pains.

I am standing at the door waiting for you!
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29 comments:

  1. RamyaJune 14, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    Good one!

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  2. Ashwini AjithJune 14, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    Wow!!! Good one!!!!

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  3. Sahana RaoJune 14, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    @Ramya: Thank you.

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  4. Sahana RaoJune 14, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    Thanks a lot Attige. Glad you liked it.

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  5. Neeraj KumarJune 14, 2011 at 6:23 PM

    The wind blew off the charm of the face..: a marvelous line.

    So, u r a poet as well!

    A good reading experience as always.

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  6. Sahana RaoJune 14, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    @Neeraj: Thanks a lot Neeraj. Your comments are encouraging as always :)

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  7. MumLee June 14, 2011 at 7:22 PM

    Cool one as always..:)

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  8. RamesHJune 14, 2011 at 9:39 PM

    Beautiful phrases. with a touch of a techi (moist mode):). Nice imagination and rhyme.

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  9. Sahana RaoJune 15, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    Thanks a lot Nishana. :)

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  10. Sahana RaoJune 15, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    @Ramesh: Ha Ha, I had not observed that. Thanks a lot for keen observation.
    Thank you for your comment. :)

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  11. SumJune 15, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    Good one...

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  12. Sahana RaoJune 15, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Thank you Sum :)

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  13. ArpitJune 15, 2011 at 7:05 PM

    Nice poem.. :)

    Thanks for dropping by..

    following you.. :)

    Keep Blgging.. Keep Smiling.. :)

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  14. TeamgsquareJune 16, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    Superb poem , though not big fan of poetry and hardly do i read one , your poem made me read it n enjoy it .

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  15. Sahana RaoJune 16, 2011 at 11:35 AM

    @Arpit Rastogi : Welcome to my space Arpit. Thanks a lot for the comment and for the following.

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  16. Sahana RaoJune 16, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    @Team G Square: Am glad that this poetry impressed you. **Happy** This is valued comment for me. Thanks a lot. :)

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  17. AbhisekJune 16, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    Nice blog and excellent post...following now :D
    Abhisek's Network

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  18. Sahana RaoJune 16, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    @Abhishek: Thanks a lot!! :)

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  19. Forever MotherJune 16, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    Dear Spicy Sweet
    Sorry I took so long to even say hello.
    Naanu busy-lazy agiddeeni eegella -- busy with work, lazy with blogging.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog and I was thrilled to be greeted with poetry today on your blog.
    I also read parts of your story of initiation into motherhood and saw pictures of your darling -- your daughter looks absolutely cuddly-adorable.
    I hope to come back more often to your blog and catch up with your life past ;-)

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  20. Sahana RaoJune 16, 2011 at 4:59 PM

    Thanks a lot! Welcome to my page!
    :D Happens.. with the blogging cycle!
    I will be happy to see you on my blog. And let me wish you get some free time everyday!

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  21. Gowthami NandigalaJune 17, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    This is so sweet and too coool...
    luvd this lovely poem of simple yet touching words!

    seem as if they came straight from the core of heart!
    keep writing :)

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  22. Sahana RaoJune 17, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    Thanks a lot Gowthami for your lovely appreciation :)

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  23. ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ AshwiniJune 20, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    Hey that's a real good one!!! Longing to be united and waiting for the ONE is portrayed so very well. I thoroughly enjoyed it.. every bit of it.

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  24. Sahana RaoJune 20, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Thanks a lot Ashwini! Am glad the emotion intended was conveyed. :)

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  25. HemantJune 20, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    This one looks gr888..and the best thing is the poem is not concluded...any chance to make a sequel and complete it!!!!! Your reader might be waiting for d same :)

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  26. Sahana RaoJune 20, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    @Hemanth: Thanks a lot Hemant. 'Wait' will be eternal for the reader on this. :)

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  27. UmaAugust 3, 2011 at 7:30 PM

    lovely lines...
    the image is lovely too..actually all of the ones you use..may I know the source if you don't mind?

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  28. Sahana RaoAugust 4, 2011 at 6:22 PM

    @Uma Thank you Uma. Yes! You can surely know. I just hit google images with various search tags till I get an image appropriate for my post. :)

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  29. smiling soulAugust 5, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    wow very nice feel of each & every ladies for their loved one...
    beautiful poem :)
    keep smiling :)

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